Hi Mahdi, I was looking forward to reading your poetry anthology as I know you've worked really hard on these in class. I'm keen to know how a lion could help you in your 'wish' poem, you must be brave to wish for a lion. Great Haiku, you got the 5,7,5 rule - awesome! I'd like to see a finished acrostic poem, if possible & I'm keen to know which area of poetry did you enjoy the most? Hope all is well with you in Lockdown :)
Hi Mahdi...I was reading your wish poem. You have a lot of ideas for wishes. Your wish to go to the sun sound a little bit dangerous- you might not make it back... If you had a million dollars- what would you use it for?
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Hi Mahdi,
ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to reading your poetry anthology as I know you've worked really hard on these in class. I'm keen to know how a lion could help you in your 'wish' poem, you must be brave to wish for a lion. Great Haiku, you got the 5,7,5 rule - awesome! I'd like to see a finished acrostic poem, if possible & I'm keen to know which area of poetry did you enjoy the most?
Hope all is well with you in Lockdown :)
Hi Mahdi...I was reading your wish poem. You have a lot of ideas for wishes. Your wish to go to the sun sound a little bit dangerous- you might not make it back...
ReplyDeleteIf you had a million dollars- what would you use it for?